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Review of Who's the Daddy

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

When a basket is left on your door step I suppose you would have some questions. The basket is making strange noises. He looks back at the women he might have made pregnant and determines he could not be a father. when he looks in the basket he is sure he is not the father. The basket contents are described as having a pair of red eyes, a scaly face, a pair of pointy ears which stood erect on either side of a pair of curved horns and a nose with large, flared nostrils.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

a girl friend comes over and attempts to nurse the thing and it sucks all her blood. Now dead He has to get rid of the body and still feed the thing. Going through multiple woman leaves him with no option but to leave the basket on another door step.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Good story. I really enjoyed it.

dblameck


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