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Review #4236397
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The Power of Music Open in new Window. [GC]
A heartbroken Jessica struggles to recover from her husband's betrayal.
by Prof Moriarty Author Icon
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Rated: GC | (5.0)
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PLOT -
Jessica is having a difficult time after her husband leaves her and struggles with being the lonely house, even though her young daughter is there.

SETTING -
This was a great story. The descriptions of Andros and what he and Jessica shared were so vivid and pulled me right into the action with them. I wasn't ready for it to end, but the Weekly Quickie word count always has a tendency to do that, not to mention the ending that leaves the reader dangling, begging for more. You made it easy to picture the scene, when Andros appeared, and how excited Jessica was when she realized how real he was.

CHARACTERS -
Jessica thinks she's woken from an wildly intense erotic dream, but the evidence of that nights are easy to be seen. Love that she decided to take the day off of work and pick up right where the night had left off. I enjoyed the link to Andros, and how Jessica was the only one that intrigued him enough to show himself and appear, as if he'd waited only for her all this time.

THINGS TO THINK ABOUT -
Fantastic little journey with Jessica as she let herself be swept up in the magic of Andros. To have someone like that ready, willing and able is pretty hot. Word choices were great, the sensuality of this piece only making it better. The awardicon is well deserved. Spot on descriptions, heat, passion and excitement. I cannot say enough good things about this Quickie. I'll be reading more of your portfolio! Write on!

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