Hi I Love WDC! Cissy❤ ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

This poem has a lovely feel to it. It speaks of sun, and fun, and laughter. The creation of wonderful memories.

You are right - those summer days with family are ones that you will always remember. And why do we not play like children? Casting aside caution, living life to the fullest... it seems that the older we get, the more we lose the ability to be like that. Until we are reminded what it was like, and then we can overcome that strange embarrassment and just have fun again.

I found your poem to be uplifting. It made me smile and think of my own summer holidays of the past, and for that I thank you.

On the technical side of things, this poem reads well. It has a pleasant rhythm and flow, and a clear rhyming scheme. I like that you made good use of punctuation, and that you allowed the capitalisation at the beginning of each line to depend on the individual sentences within the piece. This aided the overall clarity and reading experience.

Suggestions:

I only have one suggestion, dear author:

Stanza 1:

In the second line, "tree's" should be "trees".

My Rating:

I enjoyed this nice, uplifting poem. I was happy to read it.

I only had one suggestion, so I will give this item a rating of 4.5 out of 5.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .