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The Things I'd Do To You Open in new Window. [18+]
A woman scorned...
by Nikola~Thankful Library Lady Author Icon
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Flower4* Hi Nikola! Thanks for sharing this clever poem! *Smile* *Flower4*


*Reading*MY INITIAL THOUGHTS*Reading*

I really like this poem - even better, I can really relate to this poem! *Wink*

● Character(s):

Just the woman scorned. I would say it could apply to either male or female, but would a man wear stiletto heels? *Laugh*

● Storyline/Plot:

I have been in these shoes - not stilettos, but figuratively speaking, and wanted to do just those very things. Common sense and fear of jail finally prevailed, lol.

● Dialogue:

The poem is the dialogue, spoken to the cheating male.


*Heart* MY FAVORITE PART(S):*Heart*

"And once I've done all these things
You'll wish that you were dead." Well said!


*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: *Idea*

None that I could find. Perfect spelling, punctuation and grammar. Great job! *Badge*


*Vine1*IN CLOSING: *Vine2*

Thanks again for sharing this clever, humorous poem. I know your female readers will love it as much as I did. *Smile*

I think you're a very good writer, and I hope to read more from you soon. Keep up the good work, & Keep Writing! *Pencil*




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