Hi Jennyj , I found this piece on the random review page and thought I'd give it a look. I hope you'll find some of my suggestions useful!

What I liked:
I think this poem was easy to relate to! Everyone has his/her own vice they can't stay away from, and you told about yours in a funny way.

General things I noticed/specific suggestions:
You might want to add some other varieties of popcorn- honestly, I only know of movie theater popcorn and microwavable popcorn. What other types are there?

Spelling/Grammar:
"Butterey" is "buttery"- it only has one "e"
I think you're missing a word in "all its own"- should it be "all of its own"?

Overall, this was a funny little poem, and I enjoyed reading about how you turn to popcorn when you're stressed! Make sure to double check your piece for spelling. Otherwise, thank you for sharing and keep writing!

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