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 "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"        THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!  Item Title: Seven Iron Author: Norman Francis Type of writing: PoetryReviewed by:  Lisa Noe First Impression: Hello norman Francis, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary, I'm going to give you a detailed review today in order to aid you in becoming a better writer. "Beauty is in our Words"This is a nicely written poem it is structured using eight four line stanzas of various number of syllables per line. I liked your poem it tells a story. I always like a poem that tells a story. The note you have added to the end of the poem is very helpful and adds to it. I see where you won second place in the contest I'm surprised it didn't win first place. excerpt from writing: suggestions:I did not see any mistakes with your writing, the poem is good. conclusion:thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You. 
  Lisa Ann Noe ~~Image #4000 Sharing Restricted~~  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 09/06/2015 @ 11:09pm EDT