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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() This is a nicely written poem it is structured using eight four line stanzas of various number of syllables per line. I liked your poem it tells a story. I always like a poem that tells a story. The note you have added to the end of the poem is very helpful and adds to it. I see where you won second place in the contest I'm surprised it didn't win first place. ![]() ![]() I did not see any mistakes with your writing, the poem is good. ![]() thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You. ![]()
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