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*Poseyv*Item Title: Seven Iron

*Poseyp*Author: Norman Francis

*Poseyb*Type of writing: Poetry

*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello norman Francis, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary, I'm going to give you a detailed review today in order to aid you in becoming a better writer. "Beauty is in our Words"
This is a nicely written poem it is structured using eight four line stanzas of various number of syllables per line. I liked your poem it tells a story. I always like a poem that tells a story. The note you have added to the end of the poem is very helpful and adds to it.
I see where you won second place in the contest I'm surprised it didn't win first place.
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*Poseyv*suggestions:
I did not see any mistakes with your writing, the poem is good.
*Poseyp*conclusion:

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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