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 | Secret Smile  [] The path that love finds into our lives.  |
 "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"        THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!  Item Title: Secret Smile Author: Ray Type of writing:Reviewed by:  Lisa Noe First Impression: Hello ray, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary, I'm going to give you a detailed review today in order to aid you in becoming a better writer. "Beauty is in our Words"This is a sweet poem about love and a smile of beauty, structured using five stanzas of various lengths each line consists of a variety of number of syllables. I enjoyed reading this poem it touched my heart. My favorite lines are the following. excerpt from writing: That I loved you too and I savoured every second that I could as I summoned The strength to overpower my jailer and become free to be consumed by that Secret Smile. suggestions:the word savored is misspelled there is no U in it. it should read "...I savored every second..." conclusion:thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You. 
  Lisa Ann Noe ~~Image #4000 Sharing Restricted~~  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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