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Curse of the Setting Moon  Open in new Window. [13+]
A Shewolf's Lament in 11 quatrains of logaoedic verse. This is the true story.
by Carol St.Ann Author Icon
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Poseyv*Item Title: Curse of the Setting Moon

*Poseyp*Author: Carol St. Ann 9 yrs at WDC

*Poseyb*Type of writing: Poetry

*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello Carol St. Ann 9 yrs. at WDC, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary, I'm going to give you a detailed review today in order to aid you in becoming a better writer. "Beauty is in our Words"
honey, this is an exceptionally well written poem, it is easy to see how it has been awarded so many award icons. it really is very poetic sounding and flows so well, it has an unhindered steady movement and moves freely from start to finish. It is structured using eleven stanzas of four lines, or quatrains. it is well rhymed and has a nice rhythm. The title is excellent and it has a good item description.
my favorite quatrain is because I like that it says youre blessed to know...

*Poseyb*excerpt from writing:
In full moon's glow, I'm blessed to know
True pleasure at nature's own hand.
It grieves me so to have to go,
For, on two legs, I'm cursed to stand.


*Poseyv*suggestions:
I did not see any mistakes with your writing you did a good job.

*Poseyp*conclusion:

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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