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Hi amnavarro , I found this piece on the random review page and thought I'd give it a look. I hope you'll find some of my suggestions useful! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Overall, I loved your story. It was cute and sweet, and your ending made me smile. Thank you for sharing, and keep writing! ![]() ![]()
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