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 Christianity, As I Saw It (Chapter 1) Open in new Window. [13+]
This is my observation of working with Christians (and I'm not one).
by OhYeahCoolness Author Icon
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Poseyv*Item Title: Christianity, As I Saw It (chapter 1)

*Poseyp*Author: OhYeahCoolness

*Poseyb*Type of writing: essay

*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello ohyeahcoolness, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary, I'm going to give you a detailed review today in order to aid you in becoming a better writer. "Beauty is in our Words" what a nice little essay, It is so often that I read non-believers opinions about believers. some people are very rude and obnoxious I must give it to you though you stated your opinion which, you have every right to without name calling and belittling the beliefs of others. I myself am a believer in God. Yet it is not my place to judge you or anyone else for their beliefs or non beliefs all too often Christians become overzealous and judge I admit that, they become so wrapped up in their beliefs that they don't allow others the right to their beliefs be they different or like.
I think it is important that we realize their is one God for us all and he wants us to love one another and aid one another. It don't matter which religion you are as long as you have God in your life.
It is too me sad if a person has nothing to believe in. But your life is in your hands personally I placed mine in the hands of a God. "The one God."

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*Poseyv*suggestions:
Your essay is well written and written with a bit of a comedic flair.

*Poseyp*conclusion:

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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