Hallo greyeyes and good morning! I am Grateful Jess and I'll be reviewing Dear Sunday. Please remember these are only my thoughts and opinions; please feel free to take whichever you find most helpful. First Impressions: I like this poem; I like the darkness of Dear Sunday because if you're a Christian, you would think Sunday would be a pure time. In your poem, it's the opposite and I like that. Overall Thoughts: I like the rhythm and flow of Dear Sunday. I like the rhyme scheme and I especially like how you chose to write the ending of the poem. I also like how you broke the poem into stanzas; it made it easier to read. I also liked the imagery and the way you played with the words. Rating: *** Final Thoughts: Keep creating and write on! ~Jessica My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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