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Review by Grateful Jess Author IconMail Icon
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Hallo greyeyes and good morning! I am Grateful Jess Author Icon and I'll be reviewing Dear Sunday. Please remember these are only my thoughts and opinions; please feel free to take whichever you find most helpful.

First Impressions:
I like this poem; I like the darkness of Dear Sunday because if you're a Christian, you would think Sunday would be a pure time. In your poem, it's the opposite and I like that.

Overall Thoughts:
I like the rhythm and flow of Dear Sunday. I like the rhyme scheme and I especially like how you chose to write the ending of the poem. I also like how you broke the poem into stanzas; it made it easier to read. I also liked the imagery and the way you played with the words.

Rating:
*Star***Star***Star***Star*

Final Thoughts:
Keep creating and write on! ~Jessica

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