Hi Joy and good afternoon! I hope you're enjoying a hot, humid afternoon in the indoors writing your next poem or short story. I'm Grateful Jess and I'll be reviewing She Said.... Please remember these are only my opinions; feel free to use which you find most helpful.

First Impressions:
I really love this poem, Joy. I think it's really simple and I like how She Said... tells a universal story in a plain way without melodrama. You did a beautiful job writing She Said...!

Overall Thoughts:
I love the rhythm and flow of She Said.... I love how it is free verse instead of having a form. The meter in which the free verse is told in really works with the message that is trying to be conveyed. I think it adds to the simpleness of this piece.

I do like that there is some drama in She Said... which complicates the poem a bit. I think your poem really reflects life and the way the drama of life is folded into the rhythm really makes this poem beautiful. I really love this poem.

I have found no mechanical errors, however, I always suggest to people to go back and proofread to make sure they are conveying all they want to convey.

Rating:
****

Final Thoughts:
Keep up the great work and write on! I look forward to reading more poetry! ~Jessica

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .