Hi wordninja,

I just finished reading your story which I found on Read and Review, "Invalid Item"  and I would like to offer you the following review. Please note that this review is a culmination of my opinion and what knowledge I have. It is meant in the spirit of assistance and appreciation only. Please feel free to use what you deem useful and ignore the rest.

FIRST IMPRESSIONS
This was great. I usually do not review poetry, but this was priceless.

GRAMMATICAL/SPELLING
You might add some punctuation to add to the phrasing of this but other than that there are no spelling or grammar issues.


SUGGESTIONS
Your stanzas were well done. I do not have any suggestions that would improve this piece.


OVERALL IMPRESSION
I love the turn about in this poem. It feels so familiar. Excellent job. My favorite stanza is the one that starts...“I’m so embarrassed”.


Thank you for sharing your work!
Write On!!