Hi Walker ,

I just finished reading your story which I found as a featured item in your portfolio, "Invalid Item"  and I would like to offer you the following review. Please note that this review is a culmination of my opinion and what knowledge I have. It is meant in the spirit of assistance and appreciation only. Please feel free to use what you deem useful and ignore the rest.

FIRST IMPRESSIONS HA! What's not to love a poem about zombies! I wish I had seen the prompt for this.

GRAMMATICAL/SPELLING
No grammar or spelling issues noticed.


SUGGESTIONS
My only suggestion is to take another look at the last stanza, it kinda flows the rhythm of the poem off.


OVERALL IMPRESSION
I enjoyed this. It was simple but fun. I really liked the line "Run or we'll be one too!" This was a good time.


Thank you for sharing your work!
Write On!!