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| (4.5)| Hi, HAPPY 8th! WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM  "Anniversary Reviews" Overall Impression Anniversary reviews are fascinating adventures. A reviewer has the opportunity to experience a broader scope of reading material. Your work was definitely a first for me, and an enjoyable ride. (sorry for the pun) Setting/Plot/Characters The character in this story was the motorcycle. We didn't learn much about the driver, but the motorcycle gave the reader a grand tour. I've never traveled the world, so exquisite as the descriptions were, I wanted more. I would say the lack was the absence of people, but it wouldn't make any sense for a motorcycle to observe people. You did a remarkable job engaging all five senses. The story was infused with bright verb choices and expressive descriptors. I liked how you didn't just write There was a roadside bench. You gave it a purpose. You broke my heart here. sand was bagged for a Navy veteran who lost too much. A few thoughts The gilded golden palace gates garishly glared. I'm a fan of alliteration, but this sentence was too much. 2 am 2 A.M.  As a Registered Author, according to the rules of the activity linked below, you are a minor hex, and this review will lift the spell you cast.  This review is being given as part of the "Black Magic Birthday Review Bash" , presented by "The Dark Society"  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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