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 | 5:36 AM  [13+] Cereal at 5:36AM  |
| (5.0)  Hiya MFrederick! This review is being given as part of the "Black Magic Birthday Review Bash" , presented by "The Dark Society"  Oh my gosh! This is too funny! Well, not about your toe and funny bone but the experience. From your weaving I could quite imagine the whole episode and happy you did not choke yourself. I could just see you in your hoodie eating cereal like a kid!  Not exactly breakfast of champions.I really enjoyed the style of writing and was entertained by your vivid description from the "I" point of view. It has a dramatic edge and added poetic flair in lines like " a beam of light from heaven's gate" in contrast with the "..wasting." Such an evocative metaphor! Well done.  The intermittent asides are priceless and so how a mind can be thinking in many directions at once. I had to laugh at the one that the bowl might be distracting us. LOL The Disclaimer made me giggle too. "So Professional!" Good one! You have a cool way of seeing things! I can relate to that being not hungry to starving feeling too. Just the time when something sweet is called for.  The story flowed coherently and kept me engaged from start to finish! I don't find it easy to relate reality with an ease, being serious yet comical in the same time. I loved it!  Thanks for sharing your vision and gift! It made my evening! Enjoy the WDC party!eyestar  "Invalid Item" "All About Birthdays Free for all!"  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 09/02/2015 @ 2:40am EDT