As part of the competitor’s review in the 30-day blogging challenge, I chose your sleigh ride story to review. I chose it because I am a sucker for beautiful romances and it looked like you were quite talented in that area. I see you wrote this a while ago, but it is really good and I hope you get more reviews on it. These are just my opinions and you can do with them what you will.

I am glad you took the time to write a complete story. I am studying the core competency of characters, and you really took the time to develop even the minor players so well. I love that.
There is so much detail in your writing, it was so easy to let my mind create a picture that is complete and wonderful.
This is a strong well-paced story that held my interest all the way through.
When a piece is so well done, it is really hard to do anything more than rave on about how great it is. Let's just say I am jealous of your artistry.

Rating and genre seems to be appropriate. Nothing that would make little kids make funny faces or ask inappropriate questions.

Now for the technical things: Just a few things I noticed. (Your words in front and my comments in brackets)
bringing through the clouds of her thoughts. [did you mean breaking through the clouds?]
You live on a farm house [on a farm or in a farmhouse]
She wished she couldn've found the words [could have]
but Andrew had hung up one him [on him]
she had turned of the CD [off]
The apartment was spotless, yet she finding anything that needed to be cleaned or straightened. [looks like a word is missing.]
apart of my life [a part?]
On June 12 of the following that one [looks like a word is missing]