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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello there, Newbie! Welcome to WDC. *Pipe*
This is a Simply Positive Review.

*Starr* I couldn't agree more with your sentiments within this poem. We should always honor our veterans and keep in our thoughts and prayers, those who still are in active service.

*Penv* Your poem moved smoothly and the rhyme fit well within each stanza.

Observation:

"what about our soldiers,
who don't want to go,
to fight a war we can not win,
for reasons we don't know."

A question mark might be a better fit here, because it does start out asking a question.

*Vignette4* Loved this part:

"Fly the flag, stand up tall,
praise the way we live.
Show support in all you say,
find a way that you can give."

So true and real support for love of country and those who put their lives on the line in its service. *Flagb*

Well done! *Seal*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch



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