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The Girl with Silver Bracelets Open in new Window. [18+]
Don't let the title fool you.
by Sharon Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "The Girl with Silver Bracelets" Open in new Window. on "The Shameless "Plug" Page" Open in new Window.. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, rhyme scheme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyme scheme compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the plot with a thought provoking lesson.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem. Write on.

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