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 First Date Open in new Window. [18+]
A woman agrees to a dinner invitation, only to discover her suitor is hiding a secret.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "First Date" Open in new Window. on "The Shameless "Plug" Page" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with April accepting the date. The interaction between the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the smooth flow of the plot from the beginning to the climax.

Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this chilling story. Write on.

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