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Hello *Smile* , I am Thinking-Reed an I have reviewed:My Words. A simple poem asking if anyone is going to want to publish anything written by the writer.


Specifics: Line 4 . I was uneasy about the use of ' in ' here. More natural to my ear would be 'from'. Or more radically change to: Until one day they arrive in the mail.

I enjoyed this poem, it reads very well. Thank you
TR


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