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Everything written in this review is only my personal opinion and is not intended to upset or offended in any manner.




*Ornament3v*Impressions

A cute little tale.

*Ornament3b*Characterisation

Would have liked more physical descriptions woven in to the story.

*Ornament3y*Descriptions I particularly liked

The sumptuous smells of bacon and eggs wrapped my nostrils in tendrils of contentment.
I don't eat meat but I can really appreciate the textural expression in this sentence.

*Ornament3r*Overall

A short well rounded story expressed well. I think the story would have been enriched by
a bit more detailed description.

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