Impressions

Immediate connection with the rythmn and the words. It felt true and heartfelt
As the reader I understood the feelings expressed and experienced the emotions
With the writer.


Characterisation

The Characters were real and understandable.

Descriptions

I particularly liked :

Stress in your eyes asking what’s wrong with me.

The counter balance between you seeing the grandmothers stress and that its only you the writer she is concerned with. It demonstrates the depth of care of the person, elequently.

Overall

This poem has depth and meaning for many people.



Finn