\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4007876
Review #4007876
Viewing a review of:
 Invalid Item Open in new Window. []

by A Guest Visitor
Review of Wings  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
A pleasant hour Lifelessons *Smile*


*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Open in new Window.! *BalloonR*


A Greetings from "Invalid Item" Open in new Window.
I'm your friend here Samberine Everose Author IconMail Icon
Thank you for your interest in joining the contest"A Great Value of Expressions" Open in new Window. And this is one of my gifts for you, reviewing your piece that I've found in your Portfolio.

Please remember that I‘m not a professional writer or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.*Smile*

*Heart* WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE:

Title: The title of your piece captivates me while searching something to review in your Portfolio, I already have an idea about it- wings is all about angels, and angels are mysterious to me, that is the thought that hook me.

Imagery - One of the beauty of every piece is the words that weaved, because the words you used are vivid, the adjective words you used are full in imagery, and every line have its own thought and evokes emotions.

Rhyme, Rhythm and Form - This is a free verse and no rhyming pattern, but the rhythm was well created and done, it blends with the showed emotions.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow*ThumbsUp*

I just only wonder why you didn't capitalized the title..?
and the use of some punctuation to have a more smoother flow.
I just lost in the middle part, where should I rest and stop.

*Thought2* MY FINAL REFLECTION :
Wings are the soft warmth of love from our love one, that always guide us in every path we have.

Thank you for sharing this piece, I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it.
Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Everyone have its own gift and talent,
God made us unique.
Its within us, if we want to improve and share.
So WRITE ON, *Pencil*
and always share this wonderful talent you have.

Until next time.*Heart*

Samberine Sig.
Officially approved Writing.Com Preferred Author logo.
Image Protector
FORUM
A Great Value of Expressions Open in new Window. (E)
NEWBIES CONTEST"Pen me your Quote,and I'll send you Gifts" CLOSED-will resume on December
#1960298 by Samberine Everose Author IconMail Icon

"I am a Rising Star!" glass image.



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
   *NoteR* You have not yet responded to this review. Ignore
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4007876