A pleasant hour Tabitha_G Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! A Greetings from "Invalid Item" I'm your friend here Samberine Everose And thank you for your interest in joining the contest"A Great Value of Expressions" And this is one of my gifts for you, reviewing your piece that I've found in your portfolio. Please remember that I‘m not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. Please try to chew and ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste. WHAT I THINK ABOUT THE : Title - Every title of a piece whether its an image or a writings is one of its important element, because it is the first thing where in we first stumbled before going to the body of the piece. The title of your images gives me something to think,I think about the word sky is vast and line is a path, or in other words it is a path in the sky..? Imagery - My thoughts about imagery in sketching is by using a medium you have the ability to control how you put the different lines in the board or paper, every stroke or lines that you put or draw like poetry can evokes emotions, most especially when you added the colors already. I like this image by using those fine lines/ faded lines- it blends with the created theme or subject,your character is an angel, and I think as an ethereal. MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION : Just balancing- every fine lines have its own shadow. MY FINAL THOUGHT : Everyone have its own gift and talent, God made us unique. Its within us, if we want to improve and share. So write on- create an image. and always share this wonderful talent you have. Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future. Until next time. ** Image ID #1979236 Unavailable **
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