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A pleasant hour Elle *Smile*

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Meet your friend here Joanna pen name Samberine Everose Author IconMail Icon
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which was listed as one of the items to review on the "The Kiwi Review Challenge! - closed" Open in new Window.hooked me to read it, so I’m here giving you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the beauty and uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste. { e:smile}

*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
We have different definition and different way how we crafted and showed our emotions in words, when we are in the shades of being in-love and its twin - pain.
And this piece of yours is short but certain and its true.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
The title - I liked the given title, simple yet its true. It intrigues me to see, I already know how heart is broken but as I have said we have different way on how we expressed it.
Imagery - Your words are short, just only a word but it brings and took me a vivid imagery, I liked the combinations of words you used- like shudder of despair,track of tears and the other. I've found it they can stand without the other lines, and can stand also if it links on them.Nice.
Rhyme and Rhythm - It has its own Rhyme and rhythm and blends with the tone and flow.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINE:
A shudder of despair,

This really define a broken heart here in short word.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any word that can distract its flow.*ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!!!!.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece.
We experienced emotions but different on how we feel and how we showed and portrayed on it.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine Sig.
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