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A pleasant hour Elle *Smile*

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Meet your friend here Joanna pen name Samberine Everose Author IconMail Icon
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which was listed as one of the items to review on the "The Kiwi Review Challenge! - closed" Open in new Window.hooked me to read it, so I’m here giving you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the beauty and uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste. *Smile*

*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I relate this to someone who is capable of not showing a true feeling,
or in its way to control ones feeling.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
The title- enticed me to read it, in depth, and how that one word create something
Imagery - Your words crafted in the lighter tone, but when I see and taste it, I feel its emotions.Vivid imagery.
Rhyme and Rhythm - This is lyrical, and somehow I feel its own music in its own rhythm.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE WORD:
Relentless


*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any word that can distract its flow.*ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A great piece. Its useless and dead when an emotion is kept, but its better if there's a good reason on it.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine Sig.
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