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First Thoughts: The first line establishes the poem's main emotion of longing. The rhythm carries this emotion from line to line. A type in this line, I'd hope thing would be different, I suggest changing thing to things.

What I liked: I like the way this poem is written with very little punctuation and line breaks used to place the emphasizes on the words. The line breaks help show the emotion of the poem.

Final Thoughts: Write on.

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