\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/3922649
Review #3922649
Viewing a review of:
Image Protector
Real Down-Home Cooking Open in new Window. [18+]
A new bride worries that her past will catch up with her.
by Joey' Falling for the Season Author Icon
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
The first paragraph hooked me with the wedding vows. This is an exiting story. The the descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The end of the story surprised me.

I like the twist at the end, as well as the picture included in the document. This is a well-planned and written story and I am giving it a 5.0. Write on.

Image Protector
GROUP
WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group Open in new Window. (E)
Join the fun! We inspire reviewers through kindness and learning! Winner of eight Quills!
#1300305 by Maryann Author IconMail Icon

This was a gift.



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 11/18/2013 @ 4:14pm EST
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/3922649