Hello Mike, I like your poem. I too, won't be able to know which category mine would fall into sometimes. But, so what, right? Your poem is WHAT you wrote right from YOUR HEART. That is ALL and that is WHAT that matters!

Everything in life will end. Things in life and life itself, are most definitely NOT PERMANENT. Here is some food for thought, that I know, adds to my well-being while I'm still kicking and alive -

"Everything in life is temporary. So, if things are going good, enjoy it because it won't last forever. And if things are going bad, don't worry. It can't last forever either."

...and another one...

"Life is like a piano; the white keys represent happiness and the black show sadness. But as you go through life's journey, remember that the black keys also create music."

Keep posting poems like yours. Little small things have meaning!


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