Hi Elle - on hiatus . I am back with the review of the poem for "The Kiwi Review Challenge! - closed" . Please note that these are my views as a reader and are not meant to offend in any manner.

I have written acrostics and I know how difficult they are. Double acrostic are double hard but you executed it beautifully. The visual of the dolphin created in the poem and the message conveyed both are perfectly embedded in the poem. I have two very small suggestions~

1) In the second line, you have used "his" for the dolphin which is not wrong, but makes the reading a bit different. This can also be because of the reason that I do not have pets and hence cannot treat them as "he" or "she".

2) In the line Research and rescue and remember the two "ands" make the sentence a bt awkward. I must confess this line is still my favorite because of the alliteration and the message.

This is one of the best poem of yours I have read. Thank you for sharing your work!!

Keep Writing.



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .