[Overall Impression] An honest insight on your life and love. [Spelling Errors/Grammar] None that I could find. This doesn't really seem to be a piece that I would point errors out in the first place, it's a piece to express your love. [Suggestions] None,this item has covered all the things that need to be covered with much room to add more views of love. [Favorite line] We live for love, we love to love. No stealth needed, we steal with love. I chose this line because it holds a sense of truth here. I can totally relate to this. [Ending Thoughts] I thought this item that you've written was amazing. I did something like this myself a couple of years ago for the love of my life. I wrote her a poem everyday for a month which was accompanied by a short love story. I presented her with this book on Valentine's Day. She loved it. I'm not sure if you'll show your loved one what you have written here, but I can tell you that it really something. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and feelings on love. Write On! My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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