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*Pencil* [Overall Impression]
Wonderful poem style with a unique format. Excellent use of the name.

*Tools* [Spelling Errors/Grammar]
None that I could find.

*Idea* [Suggestions]
No suggestion other than to continue sharing your amazing talents.

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Again science matters fight where ignorance lies.
Taken out of context, the mass weights equalize.


I chose the above because I enjoyed the visual I got from the many arguments I find myself in over certain scientific facts.

*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]
I loved reading your item because the Acrostic poetry form is one of my favorite out of all the styles. In face it was the first I ever tried when I began writing poetry. I thought the piece you have written used a thought out word choice which made the poem that much better. The poem was easily to follow and informed the reader of what you were thinking at the time. You've done a wonderful job expressing your thought. I hope you win with this contest entry.

Write On!



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