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*Note3*FIRST IMPRESSION
An excellent poem crafted creatively with WritingML.

*Note*MY THOUGHTS
I can't say that I've seen this style of poem before, but I enjoyed the simplicity of it. The WritingML provided a visual aspect to the poem that allowed for not only a great read, but an interesting addition that made me enjoy the poem more. I don't know exactly how the title corresponds with the poem itself unless there is something that I'm missing. I must say that I'm intrigued by this Japanese style poem, I can see myself trying this poem format in the near future. Thank you for sharing this poem.

*Star*FAVORITE PART

Cat,

feral,

marks the tires

announcing who's

Boss


I chose the above because I love cats, and could clearly picture a cat showing all who is the real boss, lol.

*Right*ERRORS
None that I could find.

*Idea*SUGGESTIONS
My only suggestion is to continue creating great pieces of work like this.

Write On!

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