Disclaimer: The following words are my personal opinions and interpretations. These are meant to encourage the writer and his/her readers. Please, read carefully.

This poem is a child's version of what it is like to ride pretend horses on a carousel. Her narration is so spirited, it almost seems as though she is riding a real horse with the wind blowing in her hair.

It is difficult to perceive whether this narrator and another I have read by this author are real people or this writer's imaginings. This is quite a talent.

I can feel the happy excitement of this little girl as though I were riding alongside her. This is because you have captured her spirit.

Your rhyming is very good, though the first verse is lacking. You might consider this, or you might not. It is
completely your call.

That is the only suggestion I have for a sweet and honest portayal of a little child having fun. Did you write
this as a child from your own experience?

For all the above reasons, you have earned yourself a fan. Please, continue writing these inspirational poems. They are quality.

Write on! Doorman.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .