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Given: Oct 10, 2012 at 4:07pm
Length: 1,209 Characters |
999 w/o WritingML
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A Dozen Delight Review.
In looking in any style of poetry I look for these things, rhymes, poetry patterns, flow, rhythm, style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry.
Flow: Tells a story. Favorite words were Poppy and the characters.
Style: Quartarain with rhymes at each line one altilleration.
Rhymes: Consistent
Patterns: Takes your breath away. Hard to find a poem that makes poem and inhale your breath.
Reader Take: I can see why is it a winner for a ribbon poem twice in a roll. I do like your rhymes being consistent at the end of each line. I noticed your altilleration in "But fell foul of a roadside bomb." You did follow quatrain poem and it moved smoothly.
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