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The Widow and the Poppy Open in new Window. [E]
A War widow's experience ~ WINNER Honoring Our Veterans Contest March 2010
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Review by Tina M. Courtney Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Bug**Jackolantern* *Bug* *Jackolantern* *Bug*In looking in any style of poetry I look for these things, rhymes, poetry patterns, flow, rhythm, style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry.*Bug* *Jackolantern* *Bug* *Jackolantern* *Bug* *Jackolantern*


Flow: Tells a story. Favorite words were Poppy and the characters.

Style: Quartarain with rhymes at each line one altilleration.

Rhymes: Consistent

Patterns: Takes your breath away. Hard to find a poem that makes poem and inhale your breath. *Checkr*

Reader Take: I can see why is it a winner for a ribbon poem twice in a roll. I do like your rhymes being consistent at the end of each line. I noticed your altilleration in "But fell foul of a roadside bomb." You did follow quatrain poem and it moved smoothly.


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