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This was an excellent poem! The choice of words was good as well as the flow. The repetition of the lines "Nothing will be alright" and "Everything's worse at night' added an amazing flavour to the poem. The poem brings shiver to the reader as he/she reads the poem. The poem was in good sequence; first closing our eyes and then the bad things happen.

The poem have good use of words and had a strong impact on the reader and I felt as if my whole mind was being covered in darkness and at any time, the devil and boggieman would appear from under my bed . But, the poem ends with a ray of hope and I was relieved that it was dawn and there was some light at last

Anyways, there were no spelling errors or any suggestions. Perfect! *thumsup*

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