I started writing review for your "Revelation" and it disappeared! Will begin again. I wish you had written it in iambic pentameter. It is almost too stiff as it stands. Not enough emotion or feeling as a result of the sing-songy
"da, da, da, da, da, da, da, dum? Not sure what I am trying to express here. It is the SOUND of the piece that makes me believe the writer is not that involved, not that "passionate" about it all! Not really. Yet, nice rhyming. All in all, very scholarly and intelligently written but where is the passion?
Well, revelation is a kind of "looking back" and considering what happened and I guess in that sense, you are dispassionate and right on...

Still, I wish you had said: "The pain's forgotten after many years; too many years to shed so many tears. Those magical times will remain with me- For other times, another love to be?"
Nice poem. I'm just not sure the meter was good for the subject matter.