Hello Mr. J ,

This is a Review from "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 

Thoughts and Feelings

I am impressed with your style. You can say some powerful stuff in such a few sentences. Its amazing. I rather like your satirical writing.

Plot/Setting

Your view on religion is well expressed here. Though its short you show the development of religion in that of a person who seems like a child the entire time.

Characters

As I mentioned before the main character here seemed like a child the entire time. He never seemed to grow up and his ignorance still continued onto his death. This is a pretty powerful character you created.

Awesome Moments

The whole thing was awesome. I enjoyed that it was a satirical work on religion. I rather liked discussing things about religion. Its positives and negatives.

Your character was awesome. By refering to him and Petey Pudding Pie you gave us a feeling of him being naive, child-like, ignorant. Great use of the name to explain the characteristics of your character.

Things to Improve

There is nothing I could say to improve this work. It spoke volumes in its short format.

Overall

Great job!!! This was entertaining to read.

Thank you for the read.


This review is just my view of your work. I am not a professional and only bring to the table what your work meant to me. I do not mean to offend. You may disregard what ever you disapprove because this work is your voice.

jocelyva
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