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Everyone hates exams. But yours is livened up when you suddenly shrink...

This choice: Naomi doesn't recognise you, and brushes you away.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #11

into the shoe

    by: Anubis_1 Author IconMail Icon
Her giant hand sweeps you off of the desk you fall for a very long time. You land on a hard surface with one source of light above you. You can see Naomi on the computer. You look around and you realize that you're in Naomi's trainer! You holler and scream for help but she can't hear you. After waiting for a while inside Naomi's filthy shoe you see her move, but she seems to be getting closer. You see a giant foot appear at the end of the shoe. Immediately you run for the toe end of the shoe, but her foot is to fast! You are caught under the ball of her sweaty bare foot. You squirm and struggle but she just wrinkles her foot. (probably thinks you're a piece of lint.) Tons of pressure is soon pushed down on you and you can hardly breath. You feel her move her foot up and down with her steps, feeling weightless then being crushed again. All the while you can smell the horrid smell of her foot sweat as beads of sweat trickle across your face.


Naomi's POV: Naomi got up and put on her shoes. She thought she felt something move in one of them but it was probably nothing. She walked across the room and picked up the box and opened it. Nothing but pencils and erasers. "What!" she cried "where is he?". Then something clicked in her mind and she was racing to get her shoe off.


Finally you where set free of the prison as a wave of cool air breezed across your back. But wait, this isn't right. You where still stuck to Naomi's foot from the sweat. Naomi peeled you off of her foot and brought you up to her face with a worried expression. "Are you ok? I.." she stopped. "Oh god, you smell like my foot! I'm so sorry I didn't know." You stop her and tell her you are all right. She smiles in relief and gives you a big kiss with her giant lips. Naomi looked at you funny "you know..." She began.
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1. "I kinda like the smell, makes me a little, hungry."

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2. "You felt really good under my foot."

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