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Rated: 13+ · Interactive · Fantasy · #2334175
You die and are given a chance to come back. But you must complete a trial...Shrunken
This choice: Tina brings you to her room  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

Tina's Foot Torture

    by: DragonicX Author IconMail Icon
Tina continues to walk, each step putting massive pressure on your body, causing several bones to crack over time. Your screams unable to be heard by your sister.

After what seems like an eternity, but is only about a minute, Tina arrives at her room. She shuts and locks the door behind her as she lays back on her bed, raising her foot into the air and watching you squirm between her toes for a little bit longer.

You struggle as hard as you can but realize that even your sisters toes are too strong for you at this size and you eventually get tired and give up, grateful that she's at least not walking on you anymore.

"Awww. Are you giving up already? That's no fun." Tina reaches up and plucks you from her toes with her thumb and index finger, bringing you to her face. "I thought you were an ant but, now that I get a better look at you, I don't think I've ever seen a bug like you before."

Realizing this could be your only chance to get her attention, you muster up your remaining strength and yell as loud as you can. "Tina! It's me, John! Please help me!"

Startled by the sound, Tina looks around before realizing the sound came from the bug and brings it to her ear. "Was that you? I never knew bugs could make sounds like that. It almost sounded like you were talking."

"Yes, I did! I'm not a bug! I'm your brother, John!" You continue yelling.

"Wait, John?!" She looks at you again. "Oh wow, it really is you! How'd you get so small?" She puts you to her ear again.

You proceed to explain everything that happened and the details of the challenge.

"So, can you keep me safe until the times up? I think it's only been about 30 minutes since it started" you ask.

"Wow, that's crazy. But it sounds like you can't really lose this, right?"

"Yea, kind of."

"And even if you die, you just get another chance. So it's not like I NEED to help you."

"I guess not. What's your point?" You start to get worried.

"Well, you know how I like to play with bugs and you're the perfect size. You practically ARE a bug. And since you just come back every time, if I accidentally kill you, I just have to find you again and we can play forever!" Tina says excitedly.

"What?! That's insane! I'm your brother! You have to help me!" You start to panic.

"Oh come on! When will I ever get a chance like this again! Besides, feel how soft my feet are!" she says as she moves you down to her feet, pressing you against the sole of her barefoot with her index finger. "Hehe. See? Isn't that soft?" You struggle to break free as Tina starts sliding you up the sole of her foot, releasing you once you reach her toes.

"Tina, please! This isn't funny! I don't wanna be stuck like thi-" You get cut off as Tina clenches her toes around your tiny body. "AAH! PLEASE STOP, TINA!" you scream in pain as you feel several bones breaking.

"Hehe. What's wrong, John? Are my toes too strong for you?" Tina giggles as she releases you, watching as you lay motionless on her toes. "Awww. You're not broken already, are you?"

You struggle to even lift your arm, realizing almost your entire body has been crushed.

"Oh well. I guess the fun is over for now." Tina smiles down at you innocently as she picks you up with her thumb and index finger and brings you to her face. "Don't worry. I'll make sure to find you quickly." Tina gives you a kiss before lowering you back down to her feet and slips you in between her toes. "Nighty night 'Little' brother" Tina laughs as she starts wiggling her toes on either side of you, slowly grinding you to death in between her massive toes. Your screams soon stop as your body explodes, your remains smeared between your little sisters toes.

"That was so much fun! I hope I can find him soon so we can play some more!" Tina smiles as she runs off to search for you.

What happens next?

You have the following choices:

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1. You wake up under your bed

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2. You wake up under Tina's bed

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3. You wake up under the living room couch

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