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Characters transform after making wishes.
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Chapter #2

Jeremy is struggling

    by: rpdr fan Author IconMail Icon
**Chapter One: Uncertainty**

Jeremy sat at his desk, staring at the financial reports sprawled across the surface. His business, a small tech startup he had poured his heart and soul into for the past seven years, was on the brink of bankruptcy. Each page of numbers confirmed what he already knew: the company was hemorrhaging money, and his anxiety grew with every passing second. He ran a hand through his hair, feeling the weight of his failure press down on him.

The shrill ring of his phone interrupted his thoughts. He glanced at the screen and saw his sister's name. Emily. He hesitated for a moment, not sure he could handle a conversation right now, but he picked up anyway.

"Hey, Em," he said, trying to sound more upbeat than he felt.

"Jeremy, hi," Emily's voice was warm but strained. "I know this is last minute, but I need a favor."

Jeremy leaned back in his chair, already feeling the familiar tug of familial obligation. "What's up?"

"It's about David," she began. "I need to go stay with a friend this weekend. She just got dumped by her fiancé and she's not handling it well. I can't bring David with me, and I was wondering if he could stay with you."

Jeremy sighed inwardly. He loved his nephew, but this weekend was shaping up to be one of the worst times for company. "I don't know, Em. I've got a lot on my plate right now."

"Please, Jeremy," Emily pleaded. "I wouldn't ask if it wasn't important. It's just for the weekend. David is a good kid, he won't be any trouble."

Jeremy closed his eyes for a moment, feeling the pressure mount. "Alright, fine. He can stay."

"Thank you so much," Emily said, relief flooding her voice. "I'll drop him off tonight."

After hanging up, Jeremy stared at his phone, feeling a mix of dread and resignation. He glanced around his cluttered office, thinking about the state of his apartment. There wasn't much time to clean up or prepare. He forced himself to refocus on the reports, but his mind kept drifting back to the impending visit.

Hours later, a knock at the door jolted him from his thoughts. He got up and opened it to see Emily and David standing there. Emily looked grateful, while David wore a typical teenage expression of mild disinterest mixed with a hint of curiosity.

"Hey, come on in," Jeremy said, stepping aside to let them enter.

Emily gave Jeremy a quick hug. "Thank you again. I owe you one."

"No problem," Jeremy replied, trying to sound more confident than he felt. "We'll be fine."

David set his backpack down and looked around. "Hey, Uncle Jeremy," he said with a small smile.

"Hey, David. Make yourself at home," Jeremy replied, forcing a smile. "You like pizza, right?"

David nodded, and Emily gave Jeremy one last hug before heading out the door. "I'll be back on Sunday evening. Thanks again, Jeremy."

As the door closed behind her, Jeremy took a deep breath. The weekend ahead was uncertain, but for now, he had a responsibility to his nephew. Maybe, just maybe, the distraction would help him find some clarity amid the chaos of his failing business.

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1. Jeremy wishes David wasn’t there

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2. Jeremy and David grow

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3. Jeremy grows

4. David grows

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