Original chapter by Mystery Meat at CHYOA. https://chyoa.com/chapter/%28The-Last%29...
-One Hot Day in Konoha-
Hinata was bored. She had done so many missions lately, it felt like she could barely remember what the village looked like. So in order to get her mind off her recent difficulties she decided to take a day to relax at a popular beach. As most of her friend were off on missions or going to work that day, including Naruto, Hinata would be going by herself.
While packing her swim bag for her day at the beach she tried on her old orange one piece swimsuit to see if it still fit her, and fortunately it still did despite it being a little bit tighter in her breast area and squeezed a little on her ass. Sometimes Hinata enjoyed her "assets" in private because she didn't like to show off often, even to Naruto, sure it was a pain at the hot springs to always be looked at with envy by the other women because her boobs would always float up in the water despite trying to keep them down, but at least her husband found her beautiful; that's really all she needed. Speaking of all she needed, Hinata decided against bringing any additional clothing, just a loose cloth to tie as a sarong and a light jacket.
After she had packed all her beach needs, Hinata threw on the jacket and makeshift skirt over her one piece and left the house, intending to enjoy her scarce day to herself. Once she got there she laid out her beach towel in a secluded spot and sat for a while, enjoying the sun's warm rays. Hinata slowly felt her eyelids get heavy and before she knew it, she had dropped off to sleep.
When she woke up from her impromptu nap, Hinata stood up on wobbly legs and stretched. In her half-asleep mind, she failed to notice she had created a tear in the swimsuit at the back near her butt, exposing a fair amount of cheek. Deciding she had better get some time in the water before any large waves showed up, Hinata took off the jacket and sarong and set them on her towel, and waltzed into the cold sea. She swam out pretty far away from the shore to enjoy the cool feeling of the ocean in contrast to the sun's power that day. When she got far enough, Hinata took a moment to appreciate her current surroundings. She got a full scope of the crowded beach and smiled to herself when she saw all the people enjoying the break from all the heat, kids were playing and most of the older people had either taken to tanning or to playing volleyball.
'It's nice to enjoy all this peace time since in the war ended, I just wish I had someone else to enjoy the day with. I miss Naruto and the others...I bet Neji would've enjoyed days like this to...' Hinata thought sadly as she let her mind wander off before snapping back to the moment '...Well I shouldn't let this get me down, I've got to stay positive and just relax.'
Hinata then took in a large breath before going under the water and exploring the sea floor, although she was unable to open her eyes due to the salt the wonder of being completely submerged in the water loosened her up so much and relieved any bodily tension. She couldn't hold her breath for long, so she positioned herself to shoot upward...but the second she launched herself, she was tugged back violently. She was caught by something, though she couldn't tell what. Each time she sprung her legs her body wouldn't move. With her breath running short, Hinata desperately lunged up again and again, cringing at the discomfort of her ass getting squeezed tighter and tighter by her swimsuit. It tugged painfully between her lips and pressed down on her ample chest. Hinata realized her swimsuit was caught on something but was unable to see the hooked rock caught in the small hole in her torn suit from her earlier stretch.
Hinata kept trying to spring free but the suit wouldn't budge at all and she was running out of air fast, the pressure of each push reinforcing the massive wedgie her suit was giving her, but she had much bigger problems to focus on. Becoming completely panicked, Hinata let her mind scramble on solutions and the fact that she was dying. She considered removing the swimsuit, but despite facing death, she found she needed her modesty. Hinata couldn't believe that she might die today, on her day off, after all she had been through throughout the years. W-was this really it? The water seemed to be getting darker. It was too late?....NO! She had come to far to die here! She had a life with all her friends and the one she loved most in this world, in a last ditch effort to survive, she swam blindly down to the ground, accidently kicking the rock, loosening her trap, and gave one final push with the last of her strength.
Rrrrrrrrriiiiippppppp
Light filled her vision again as Hinata broke the surface of the water, coughing violently and taking in deep breaths; but the noise was cancelled out by the beach-goers. Hinata found the strength to steady herself while trying to regain her breath after her close encounter with the grim reaper. Tears filled her eyes, blurring her vision. She shut them for a moment and tried to take in the beautiful world through sound. A few moments passed before she set off as she tried to regain her senses and stamina, once she was in the clear she took a second to relax again not wanting to exhaust herself and actually drown on her way back to the shore. She began to rub her sore shoulders where the swimsuit had rubbed against her while trying to escape, and while rubbing she noticed that her straps had fallen off so she tried to adjust them...only to find nothing.
Her eyes shot open, Hinata had felt around her body and felt only her bare naked skin. Dread filled Hinata's soul as heat filled her face. Hinata realized that in all the chaos of her survival, her suit had given way and ripped in two. Looking down, to her mortification her breasts had floated up. She quickly covered them before someone saw and once she did that she got a view of the top part of her suit disappearing from sight as it sunk to the depths. The bottom half was nowhere to be seen.
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