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Rated: NPL · Interactive · Other · #2261181

I didn't like the opening to the first one so... here we are.

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Ruby rushed back to her dorm to see if anyone would be available. When she got there, there was only Yang doing homework. If anyone would make a good test, it'd be a sister.

"Hey sis, can I show you something?"

"It'll have to be quick, I'm in the middle of-" She stopped almost immediately when she saw Ruby's eyes glowing.

Ruby noticed straight away from Yang's overly relaxed posture that it had worked.
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