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Chapter #6

Without any assistance whatsoever, Jack is doomed

    by: Tisch Author IconMail Icon
Trying with all of his might to get out of what was coming next, Jack managed only to get an inch or two further out at best. Not enough for him to completely escpae the great grip of his best friend's butt. Jack was losing more and more time and the noise behind him grew louder. The moment was so surreal for him, he couldn't comprehend anything at that point. Finally, Jack began to feel a sludge at his back and turned around just enough to sight the brown entrails of Mariah about to overtake him. He could do nothing as the mess swept him up and dragged him down to the water below.

*SPLASH*

*PLOP*

After entering the oval-shaped contraption, more of Mariah spilled on top of Jack. Now completely within the dense ball of poop, Jack struggled to make his way to the surface and alert Mariah. At this point, Jack was on full-flight mode, adrenaline kicking in and taking the putrid stench and horrible feeling out of the equation for Jack. This sudden burst of energy did lead him to get to the top of Mariah's pile, but no further than that. He tried calling out to Mariah with whatever he had left, but none of his cries made it past the tan derriere covering the seat. Hopeless, Jack now peered upwards, one final bit of crap falling from above, right onto him.

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Mariah grimaced as she wrapped up her business. "For crying out loud, that wasn't pleasant" she muttered. "Damn good thing this crap happens in private". Mariah wiped, then pulled up her pants and got off the toilet. Turning around to flush, she noticed an inconsistency in the mess below. Maybe it was her imagination, but it looked like an arm or something of the sort was sticking out of it. "That's disgusting" Mariah sneered. No later than she said this, Mariah flushed her remains and washed up, going about her business for the rest of the day.

Jack, on the other hand, had no more business. Jack spent the rest of his significantly shortened life trapped within the droppings of one of his closest friends, getting all too close and personal with her inner workings...
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