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Chapter #28
The doorbell rings, Carm is here
by: Unknown
You hear the doorbell ring after what must've been 10 minutes or so. "Carmen's here!" Teran sings as you look up from her smelly shoe. Teran runs out of the room as you hear her bound down the stairs to the door. You hear loud laughing and talking as Carmen and your sister enter the room. "I was just finishing my run when you called so I didn't have time to shower after running 5 miles." Carmen says. "Damn girl!" Teran says. "Yeah not all of us do cheer!" Carmen says giggling. "You play softball though!" Teran says. "True haha. So what do you have to show me? You sounded pretty excited on the phone." Carmen says. "Remember my brother Jake?" "Yeah. He's such a loser! What about him?" "Why don't you look in my cheering shoe?" "Um ok Teran..." Carmen says. You look up and see a huge face appear high above.
Carmen's hair is dirty blonde with green eyes and is very pretty and also a tomboy. You remember one time your sister had dared Carmen to put her socks on your pillow. Your pillow had reeked of sweaty feet. You see her pretty face with her hair in a ponytail that she lets down as she says "All I see is a little action figure or doll or something." Teran kicks the shoe over causing you tumble out and you bounce before trying to collect yourself. "It's not a toy Carm, that's Jake." "What?!? No fucking way! Why is he so small?" "He was messing around with one of my moms company's things and somehow it shrunk him. I don't know the fucking science detail crap. My mom wanted to punish him but she had to go to a meeting so gave him to me to punish." Teran says. "That's so fucking cool!" Carmen says. You see that Carmen is wearing a light gray shirt which has turned dark in some places from sweat and tight short black running shorts and dirty white crew socks. The smell of sweaty feet assaults your senses as you realize that the putrid smell is coming from Carmen's socked feet. "So how have you punished him?" Carmen says with a sly grin. "With my feet mostly. I just got done with practice so I've been stomping and squishing the little shit." Teran says stepping towards you as you back away from her sweaty barefeet. Carmen moves her socked foot towards you and knocks you over as the smell of her horrid sweaty feet washes over you. You look up at the bronzed goddess tomboy who towers over you. You turn and see your sister grinning down at you as she says "Wanna help me punish him?" And shoots you a wicked grin.
Carmen grins down at you as you smell their sweaty feet. "I'd love to girl! I just ran 5 miles and I haven't washed these socks in a week!" Carmen laughs. "Perfect!" Teran says grinning. "So can I just step on him?" Carmen says. "Yeah. You can't kill him, he'll just be in a lot of pain." Teran says. "So Jake, remember when Teran dared me to put my socks on your pillow and then you made fun of me for having smelly feet? Well how do my feet smell now?" Carmen says laughing as she raises her massive socked foot over you. The bottom of her once white sock is dirty and gray and looks well worn. You see Carmen is wiggling her toes as she raises her foot. "I'm gonna stomp ya Jake!" She booms as her foot hovers over you. It descends lightning quick and you are stomped beneath her sweaty socked foot. Her dirty white socks are damp with her foot sweat and smell awful. She grinds her foot on you before lifting her foot up to stomp again.
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Carmen stomps you over and over under her sweaty damp socked foot. Both girls laugh as Carmen savagely stomps you. Carmens feet were pretty big even at normal size and she was loving stomping on you. As she grinded her socked foot on you, you heard Teran say "Come on Carm, take your socks off! He'll love it!" Carmen lifted her foot off of you and grinned. "Get ready Jake to REALLY smell my feet!" Carmen said while Teran giggled. You watched Carmen grin at you as she reached for her socks.
Carmen hooked the back of her damp dirty white crew sock and slowly peeled it off. She did the smell with her other sock and the smell of her sweaty feet washed over you. The socks really kept the smell contained. Carmen wiggled her massive toes with their black nail polish. Her feet reeked, they were much worse than Teran's. "Shit girl, you're feet stink! I can smell them up here!" Teran said giggling. "Yeah I've been pretty busy lately and no time for a shower. Sucks to be tiny around em." Carmen said. You watched as she moved her sweaty vinegar smelling foot towards you. You tried to run but Teran kicked you right into Carmens sweaty stinky foot. The foot rolled over you and Carmen smothered you. You were overwhelmed by the smell of sweaty musky feet. It was the worse smell you'd ever smelled. Carmen laughed as she said "Deep breaths Jake. I want to hear you." You initially didn't comply but she increased the pressure on you burying you under her sweaty foot flesh. "If I don't hear you sniffing I'm going to crush ya!" Carmen boomed while Teran laughed. You obeyed and took deep breaths of Carmens sweaty smelly foot.
Carmen stomped and smothered you while also rolling you around under her sticky sweaty feet. "This is so much fun!" Carmen said as she squeezed and grinded your tiny body between her sweaty cheesy toes. "I see you actually painted your nails. What's the special occasion?" Teran said laughing while Carmen grinded you. "Oh shut up. I had a family party I had to go to to and I was wearing sandals and my mom didn't want my feet looking all nasty, so she made me get a pedicure. I paint my nails all the time!" Carmen said as she grinded you particularly hard between her thick toes. "Carmen getting a pedicure. That's something I'd love to see!" Teran said laughing as Carmen playfully punched her. "Why don't you stop teasing me and help me torture your brother?" Carmen said smiling as she releases you from her toes and brought her sweaty smelly sole down on top of you. Carmen grinded you into the ground under her vinegary foot and laughed as she felt your pitiful struggles under her huge foot. She lifted her foot off of you and you looked up to see Teran and Carmen grinning down.
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