In a normal universe, when Keiichi raised his voice about and laid out a complaint that Hild would use a wish to try and force Urd to go back to Hell with her, Hild sent out a spade-shaped kiss. Belldandy intercepted it with a heart-shaped kiss of her own, causing Hild’s kiss to hit a long-legged frog and explode it.
In this, Belldandy’s heart-shaped kiss missed Hild’s spade-shaped kiss. When Hild’s kiss touched Keiichi, he, Belldandy, Skuld, Chibi-Peorth, and Urd all gasped.
After several moments, nothing happened. Urd growled, “What did you just do?”
“Since he was being cheeky, I decided to punish him with a time-delayed punishment that I won’t reveal at the moment. I could remove it, but it would mean you coming with me, Urd,” Hild answered with a playful smirk. “Or I could help return Peorth’s body back to her normal age for free. Coming up with punishments does cheer me up, after all.”
The goddesses and Keiichi all looked at each other. Chibi-Peorth said, “I can wait a little bit more for us to convince-”
“Nope,” Hild spoke up, waggling a finger. “Either I free Keiichi from his punishment or I help get you back to normal. Not both.”
Keiichi looked down and tightened his fists. “Damn. I’m… I’m sorry, Hild. Please forgive me.”
“Hn,” Hild uttered as she shrugged. “Not feeling like it.”
“Then help Peorth,” Keiichi said, getting gasps around him. “Whatever Hild did to me, I know we can overcome it.”
“Keiichi,” both Belldandy and Chibi-Peorth uttered.
After Chibi-Peorth was changed back to her usual Peorth self and Welsper the male former-demon-who cursed-himself-into-a-cat-to-avoid-punishment was changed into a female cat by Hild, Hild left a part of herself as Chibi-Hild with Mara. Peorth continued to stay at the temple, claiming she was on vacation. The Norns and Keiichi knew she was staying to both figure out a way to pay Keiichi back and to help remove whatever punishment Hild laid on him.
In the morning, Keiichi entered the kitchen, where Belldandy was cooking. He asked, “Good morning, Belldandy. How are you?”
“Good morning, Keiichi. I’m doing well,” Belldandy replied as she looked towards him. A slight pink glow began to emit from her eyes. “Especially so, now that you’re awake. How are you?”
“I’ll let this be my answer,” Belldandy replied as she quickly walked over to Keiichi. She held him in place with a one-armed hug that had her hand on his butt and her other hand was holding the back of his head in place.
“Bell, what are-” Keiichi uttered before Belldandy began to give him a deep kiss. He let out confused whines when she used one of her thighs to rub his crotch. ‘What is Belldandy doing? This is straight out of one of Urd’s mangas!’
Eventually, a blushing Belldandy let Keiichi go and asked, “Well?”
“G-good, very good!” Keiichi uttered, his entire face a bright pink from blushing.
Belldandy put a finger near her lips and asked, “I wonder if we can continue later? Just the two of us?”
“Ma-maybe?” Keiichi asked back. “I’ll go wake up the others.”
“Thank you, Keiichi. I’ll have breakfast ready when you get back,” Belldandy replied as she returned back to the stove.
As Keiichi walked away, he thought, ‘That was weird… Wait, that’s the punishment Hild put on me! But the last time something like that happened, it was with Peorth putting a magic pill in some soda I drank. But Belldandy was able to dispel it because Urd’s potions and pills can’t interfere with true love!’
Keiichi was right and wrong. The pill Peorth altered was one that was intended to make him fall in love with Peorth. Because of the soda’s carbonation, the effect was altered to ‘Anyone Keiichi looks in the eyes will fall in love with him’. Belldandy was able to dispel it because Urd’s potions aren’t so poorly made that they’d screw up a perfect match of Keiichi and Belldandy.
Hild’s curse was similar, but affected the urge to kiss and lust without affecting love in any way.
Keiichi planned on looking away when he spoke with Urd, telling her what happened with Belldandy and hoped it would lead Urd to brewing up a cure.
Then he turned the corner and ran into someone. As he accidentally looked them in the eyes, he uttered, “Whoops, sorry. Ack! Oh no, sorry!”
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