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Chapter #57

Edelgard Returns

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Dorothea only had one button of her jacket undone when a loud knock startled the both of you. Dorothea panicked for a short moment. She couldn’t answer with you lying on her bed; she’d have to hide you quickly. Luckily, she already had a favorite place to store you away.

“Be right there!” Dorothea said cheerily. As soon as her hands wrapped around you, you knew where you were headed. With the top button of her jacket already undone a little bit, she had no problem dropping you in, pressing you down in her cleavage, once again pressed tightly by her breasts. The soft skin pressed tightly around you, molding to your face and mouth, making breathing hard, and speaking impossible.

“There’s never a bad reason to put you there, don’t you agree?” She whispered down at you. The words were slightly muffled, as you were completely entombed in Dorothea’s feminine flesh. This was a position you were getting far too used to far too quickly. You could tell each step the woman took since everything around you wiggled just a tiny bit.

The hinges of her door creaked slightly as she opened it, and they you heard her exclaim out.

“Edelgard! I didn’t expect you back so soon!”

You were surprised. Edelgard seemed pretty flustered when you left, so you hadn’t expected her to be back after only a few minutes. You weren’t sure what could have changed, but you thought it was probably a good thing that you weren’t here completely at the mercy of Dorothea. Little did you know, the princess desperately wanted you close to her again. Edelgard’s voice reached you next, slightly nervous.

“May I enter?”

“Of course.”

In Dorothea’s tight bra, you wobbled slightly with each step she took, soft skin pressing against you and then easing. You could hear Edelgard sitting down on the bed, and then the boobs covering you bounced a little more wildly as Dorothea sat down herself. After a few moments of awkward silence, Edelgard spoke up.

“Our…exchange earlier made me realize something. But first, can you bring him out please? I can take a guess as to where you’ve concealed him.”

And so, a flash of light entered the darkness of Dorothea’s cleavage, and you were fished out, placed gently on the bed between the two young women. Edelgard looked down at you thoughtfully, trying to maneuver the situation to something like before. If only she knew how easy that'd be with Dorothea.

“I’ll be frank. I don’t like how…off-guard I was taken by our previous exchange. As a leader, I should be sure and in control of myself at all times.”

You can see a resolve cross the princess’s eyes. This is someone who doesn’t ever want to appear weak.

“Also, I know I can’t achieve all of my goals with brute force alone. I hope it never comes to this, but…”

Edelgard pauses for a moment. The silence hangs heavy, and you can tell she wants to pick her next words carefully. She sighs before finishing.

“There may come a time where I may need to try to seduce someone. Given my bumbling earlier, and your natural charisma, I would ask that you teach me.”

Then she looked down at you. She didn't want to just assert herself on you, that wouldn't be becoming of a princess. But she had an excuse ready.

“And I ask that you help too. You would be my target for these exercises.”

A chuckle emanated from Dorothea, surprising you both.

“Target? Edie, he’s a pretend lover, not a political piece to be dealt with. For lesson number one, how about you try asking him again with a little more feminine charm?”

Edelgard flushes, considering the instructions, knowing that this was going to be embarrassing. On the other hand, she knew that the only way to improve at something was to be bad at it first. She tried to calm herself down; she could do this. She had always been a model student after all. She tried to imagine how Dorothea would ask for this favor, and that made her blush even redder. Well, it’d be a start at least. She twirled her hair and gave you a warm smile. Her finger made its way over to you, caressing your cheek softly. The sensation sent a tingle through you. The future empress was beautiful after all.

“Do you think you might be able to help me with something?” She asked in a tone that matched Dorothea’s normally naughty demeanor. It sounded unnatural coming from her. Next, she pouted slightly, which looked even more strange on Edelgard’s normally very stern face.

“It would really mean a lot if you were to help Dorothea and me with my lessons.”

Question asked, you looked over at Dorothea, who was clearly trying to suppress a laugh. After calming down, she gave her critique.

“Well, it was much better than ‘target’, but I’m afraid playful and teasing doesn’t quite seem to fit you, Edie. I think you’re more of a ‘I’m going to take charge, and you’ll come along for the ride,’ kind of gal. That being said, we’ll have to practice and see what works best.”

Dorothea giggled as Edelgard flustered slightly, but the princess quickly recovered, giving off a sigh.

“That’s an approach I think I can manage. Do you have time for a lesson? I feel incredibly inadequate.”

Dorothea grinned wide. There was nothing else she’d rather be doing. She imagined all of the fun situations she could put you in with the princess, and what she might be able to convince her to do. What an incredible stroke of luck! Conversely, Edelgard was curious what exotic ideas the songstress could come up with for you.

“Of course! But you have to promise me that you’ll be okay with being embarrassed.”

Once Edelgard nodded her affirmation, she looked over at you. Cold, stern eyes met yours.

“Nothing we do leaves this room, or someone might find themselves sewn into the cushion of the Black Eagles common room chair. Do you understand?”

I gulped at the threat, and then nodded furiously.



What happens next?

1) Dorothea makes Edelgard flirt with you.

2) Dorothea says that Edelgard should be comfortable in her own body; especially her most intimate areas. She suggests that the princess should have you get close to all of them to desensitize herself

3) Edelgard gets through the lesson as quick as possible before taking you back to her room for some alone time.



You have the following choices:

1. A Talking Lesson

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2. Edelgard getting comfortable with her own body.

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3. Carried off to Edelgard's room.

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