Chapter #4And things were going so smoothly! by: Quagmire69   Yu Chaba: Looks like they have patrols manning the perimeter...
Tenten: Yamanaka: I think I can sneak in though, since only a handful of them are ninja...
You think you can distract them for me?
YC: Distract them, yes.
Not get caught, fingers crossed.
Tenten: Just...
Try & do you're best...
YC: Alright...
(You stealthily jump from the tree tops until you reach a dry one, diseased and in the process of dying. Concentrating the chakra in your hand, you placed it on the tree trunk, then performed a crude Fire Release, only really able to produce some sufficiently hot flames from your touch, igniting the wood. With that done, you fled to another tree top, seeing the immolated tree begin to go up in flames)
Thief Perimeter Patrol: SHIT!!
🔥🔥🔥
🔥🌳🔥
🔥🔥🔥
Fire!
Get off your lazy asses & let's put it out before our whole setup is burned to the ground!
Thief 1: Crap!!
Water buckets! We need water buckets!
Thief 2: If any of you idiots got a water release, now's the time for you to do something!
Thief 3: Hell, we probably have a scroll with a water release scroll...
Thief 4: I'll go check!
YC: I can't believe that actually worked.
Tenten is almost to their warehouse, so I think this will all go smooth-
💫🔥🌳🔥
(The forest fire you created caused other trees to fall with flames, one of which hit yours, causing it to fall into the band of thieves)
Thief 5: Who the hell are you?
Thief 6: Did we get a new rookie?
Thief 7: Looks like too much of a wimp to roll with us.
Thief 8: Wait!!
That symbol on his headband!
Thief 9: He's a Hidden Leaf Ninja!!
Thief 1: I bet the little punk started that fire!
YC: What!? No!!
I would never start a fire in a forest!
I promised a bear & everything!
*Gasp!*
TPP: Little bastard has soot all over his hand!
Thief 3: Those fat pig bastard Akimichi's must've sent for their scroll...
Thief 2: Who else are you with, you little shit!?
YC: Bold of you to assume that I needed any backup...
✴⬅
(As a reflex, you used a wind chakra infused hand to slap the oncoming shuriken away, causing it to imbed itself into the shin of a thief)
Thief 5: AAAAAHHH!!!
YC: I-I meant to do that...
TPP: Half of you put out the fire, the rest of you, kill the brat!
(The deadly thieves split up, the weaker ones dealt with the fire, while half the thieves approach you)
Thief 6: Let's get two birds with one stone!!
Water Style: Sunken Serpent!!
(The hydroconstruct made it's way towards you)
YC: Okay...
Earth Style: Rocky Roll!
(With a layer of hardened earth around your body, you somersault through the Sunken Serpent, spraying water all around, including part of the fire, then rolling over the thief of a rogue ninja, knocking him out)
Thief 7: Rocky Roll?! The hell kind of Jutsu is that?
Thief 8: The Chunin made it up!
YC: Of course it's a real jutsu!
I performed it, didn't I?
Thief 9: Get ready to fry, shrimp!
Lightning Style: Raiden's Strike!⚡
(You saw the terrible situation you were in as a puddle of ankle-deep water, encased in a suit of earth. According to the rules of chakra natures, you were in big trouble. As a last ditch effort, you eject yourself from the rock, spinning with the aided propulsion of wind release)
Thief 9: Slippery little bastard!!
⚡
Wind Style: Flutter Jump!!
(With wind release at your feet, you managed to propel yourself further in the air, kicking the lightning release into the tree behind her)
Thief 9: Ha!
You missed you little-
🌿💫
(A branch breaks off, cracking against her head, T.K.O)
YC: Ha!
I'm on a roll!
👊💫
(You were sucker punched by a hulking brute you've yet to see before)
Head Thief: How pathetic that you runts can't swat down this poor excuse of a Chunin...
YC: I take it that you're the leader?
Head Thief: Good observation...
For a dead man!!
➡ 👊
YC: AAAH!!
(You evaded at the last possible moment)
Head Thief: Hold still so I can beat your head in like a melon!
➡👊
➡👣
(You do your best to evade his attacks, causing a few other thieves to get hit, but you tripped back on a tree root, laid out on the ground)
✊
(The brute grabs you by the collar, barring his teeth)
YC: P-Please!! I'm too young to die!!
I never got to be with a cute girl in anything other than missions!!
Head Thief: *Cackles*
Time's up, little man...
Thief 1: Kill him!!
Thief 2: Rip his head off!!
Thief 3: Snap him like a twig!!
🔗
💥
💫
😵
(Weighted chains came from above, striking the thief leader & knocking him out cold)
Tenten: Yu, hurry up and get the scroll!
I'll handle these idiots...
YC: Got it!!
(You ran over to the warehouse, pursued by several other thieves. Entering the building, you see that the 4th thief has turned the place upside down looking for the Akimichi Clan Scroll)
Thief 4: Got it!!
YC: Thanks for finding it for me...
Sure saves us all the trouble, so if you could just hand it over, we'll be on our way.
🔔
(The thief threw a kunai at a large bell, likely a reinforcement alarm)
Thief 4: We'll kill you and everyone those fat fucks send our way.🗡🗡🗡
(Based on the amount of kunai on him, he's not a true ninja, but just a trained assassin with an underdeveloped chakra network)
YC: Earth Style: Rocky Road!!
(Encased in hardened earth, you charge at the thief, ready to tackle him, but the thief evades, throwing a barrage of kunai.
Fortunately, your earth armor deflected and stopped the incoming kunai)
YC: Gonna have to do better than-
💥
(You were blown back into some furniture)
Thief 4: I may not know how to use my chakra, but I know how to use paper bombs you cocky little shit...
(The explosion was primarily absorbed by your earth armor, but you certainly got the wind knocked out of you. Through the tinnitus you could hear several footsteps, recognizing the blurs from your dazed eyes as the reinforcements surrounded you. As an instinct, you regenerate the earth armor, thicker and harder than before right before as the reinforcements gang up on you, wailing on you from every direction)
Thief 4: You can't keep that up forever...
YC: You're right...
I need to switch things up!
(You pulverized your armor, using the dust as a smokescreen before exhaling a torrent of flames to catch them off guard, forcing them back with a couple of them dropping to the ground to drop & roll)
Thief 4: You bastard!!
If you want this scroll so much, then why don't you be it's test subject!?
YC: No you idiot!
It's a Forbidden Jutsu!
Who knows what it can do!
(You fight over the scroll, stretching the medium it was written on, you were fearful about it ripping)
Thief 4: 🗡 Stand still & die!!
YC: Stop!!
You're gonna rip it
✨
(A flash of light blinded the air, and a harsh fall messes with your consciousness.
As you regain consciousness, you discovered a glowing ball of chakra enter your abdomen, A surge of chakra permeated throughout your body)
YC:*Groan*
What the hell happened?
*BOOM!!!*
What the hell was that?!
(You exit a weird tunnel to the floor, but something about this is different)
YC: Is the floor...bigger?
No, that's-
*BOOM!!!*
Impossible...
(You see Tenten stumble in through the doorway, injured & absolutely gigantic)  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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