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These kids are so huge and obese, they can squash anyone so small whatever they want.
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Chapter #5

Ashley’s younger brother, Tobias

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Ashley remains confident that this drink would work, when she spotted her twelve year old brother, named Tobias coming over to the kitchen. Again, she always despised him for being too loved the most by her parents, even though Ashley finds Tobias annoying for everything he’s done to her. She sits there, saying nothing but watching the TV, even when her brother stands ugly in front of her, trying to get some attention to say the least.

“Urgh! You’re so annoying when you done that! Move out of the way, you little brat!” Ashley makes a grunt of annoyance, when demand to move away from her sight.

“Alright, fine! I was gonna say hello and all!” Tobias shrugged as much as it happens to him all the time.

And so, he walked away to the kitchen, leaving Ashley nothing more but grunt in annoyance. But she took a sneak peak by turning her head to see her bratty brother opened the fridge door, and grabbed a bottle of soda without realising he took the fattening potion, instead of the original. That made her smirked a little, knowing Tobias’s falling a trick.

When he walked past Ashley again, both said nothing and he headed back to his bedroom to have a drink, leaving Ashley to laugh a little, and she surely is looking forward to see the outcome of her long-awaited revenge.

“Hehe! That’ll teach him a lesson or two!” Ashley snickered so heavily.

All she can do is sit there on the couch, watching some TV, and wait for the big moment to come. She couldn’t wait to see Tobias’ reaction and even by the state of his weight, she’s hoping it could be a massive gain, so she can make fun of her brother easily. Luckily, she wouldn’t have to wait long, and she could hear the room rumbling, which it could mean the potion stuff her boyfriend gave to her, really worked entirely!

Ashley can now laugh and couldn’t believe Tobias had been fooled by her trick. She’s really desperate to check out on him, but that was until a loud voice, that sounded like it was a tearful anger tone from the bedroom.

“ASHLEY!!! YOU’RE GONNA PAY FOR THIS!!!” That was Tobias’ voice in anger!

This has caused Ashley to have some second thoughts, and felt with him being so mad and wanted to take action, she feels it was a huge mistake! But how huge Tobias has grown? That’s the question she now fears to know, and it wouldn’t be that long until she felt the ground started to shake rapidly, and hearing massive booms, as if Tobias is coming straight to his sister.

*THOOM...THOOM...THOOM...THOOM...THOOM...*

That trembling impact had caused Ashley to be afraid, as she seems to be overdone it by ways of revenge. She knew her brother’s coming to find her, and there isn’t enough time to hide, when Tobias can be seen storming into the room, breaking the door frame with his newly might. He looks so huge, Ashley couldn’t believe how obese he’s gotten, but his expressions tells a story. He was clearly upset with tears pouring down to his cheeks, but looks a lot more angry, like he already knew who caused to get fatter.

He had that pear-shaped body, making his butt and thighs the largest part of his newly fattened body, as well as his belly looking noticeably fat too! His clothes are so tight as a result of his massive gain, exposing his fat in the process. He looks so massively obese and taller too, as Tobias looked like he weighed at...

You have the following choices:

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1. ...500lbs!

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2. ...1000lbs!

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3. ...1500lbs!

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4. ...2000lbs!

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